Monday, June 6, 2011
Stuff about my righting
I found out I have always been good at coming up with ideas never been good at grammar sense 7th grade grammar has been my weakest link I have been good at coming up with ideas and I am great with voices.
Thursday, May 5, 2011
The family
My name is Carter I have 2 sister and 2 brother. We have no parents and we live in the middle of the Bermuda triangle. We are a all immortal and I am the balance between the family my brother are the evil ones and my sister are the good ones. I am neutral I keep one side from becoming to powerful. If you ever herd of the lost city of Atlantis well we live were it use to be. Key words use to be. We had a little fight a long time ago when we were at Atlantis. My brother and sister were arguing over something I cant remember it was 2000 years ago so it is hard to remember.
My sister finally lost here temper and picked a chair up using here mind and through it at my brother. My brother quickly reacted and punched the chair shattering it to pieces. I was out the side trying to rest when this happened. I heard the chair shatter and looked through the window and saw what was happening. I thought this might be one of those quick bar battles they have were they through a few punches and chairs at each other and then it is over. So I ignored them and decide when they were done with there fight I would wipe the humans minds so they forgot about the battle. That was my first mistake I must have fallen asleep because I closed my eyes and it seemed like a second had passed when I heard the building next to me blow up. I quickly jumped up and look at the destruction.
I realized that this fight I was going to have to get in and stop it. Abby and Braun were battle in where the house use to be and Ally and Blake (Ally was one of my sister and Blake was one of my Brothers) were in the air fight back and forth. I looked(Abby was one of my sister and Braun was on of my brothers) at my hand a and a sword appeared there I walked slowly to were Abby and Braun were and swung my sword. It cause a wave a electricity witch knocked both of them over. I walked over and was about to tell them to stop when Blake came out of no where and tackled me we flew through a wall and landed in some ones kitchen. I used my front feet to kick him off he hit the ceiling and fell back to the ground I should up and was about to ask him what was that for when lighting bolt hit me. I went through two walls and landed on a street. I slowly rolled over and pushed my self up. I got a head ach from that shot. Know I was mad I walked back to where the battle was. Right when I got there Ally and Blake charged at me I pointed at Ally and a fireball launched at her it hit her and she went flying I swung a punch at Blake. He stopped and dodged it then countered it with a kick. Me and him fought back and forth for a while tell I finally got the upper hand and shot him in the air with a gust of wind.
Then Abby and Braun through me into the air I stopped when I was about 126 ft on the air I stood there floating. Then I realized what I was going to have to do to stop the fighting. I stayed up there and observed the fighting for a little while. The I started to for a highly concentrated ball of energy. It took me a while then when I was finish I shot it. It completely wiped out the city and it people. Every thing was gone. I woke up on the ground and so did my brother and sisters they were to tired to continue fighting.
Atlantis was gone and we decided that this could never happen again so we new that we would have to live on the remains of this once great city to remind use of what happened. We still to this day have fight but I am able to controls them much better now so we don't lose any cities. All the stories you ever heard about the Bermuda triangle are fake we make them up so we don't have million of humans looking around are island and asking a lot of question. Every thing that enters here we destroy we do that so the humans think the Bermuda triangle is hunted and they don't enter any more. Some people have lived even thought they entered we just wiped there memory and sent them back. This is my family and as much as they annoy me I love them.
My sister finally lost here temper and picked a chair up using here mind and through it at my brother. My brother quickly reacted and punched the chair shattering it to pieces. I was out the side trying to rest when this happened. I heard the chair shatter and looked through the window and saw what was happening. I thought this might be one of those quick bar battles they have were they through a few punches and chairs at each other and then it is over. So I ignored them and decide when they were done with there fight I would wipe the humans minds so they forgot about the battle. That was my first mistake I must have fallen asleep because I closed my eyes and it seemed like a second had passed when I heard the building next to me blow up. I quickly jumped up and look at the destruction.
I realized that this fight I was going to have to get in and stop it. Abby and Braun were battle in where the house use to be and Ally and Blake (Ally was one of my sister and Blake was one of my Brothers) were in the air fight back and forth. I looked(Abby was one of my sister and Braun was on of my brothers) at my hand a and a sword appeared there I walked slowly to were Abby and Braun were and swung my sword. It cause a wave a electricity witch knocked both of them over. I walked over and was about to tell them to stop when Blake came out of no where and tackled me we flew through a wall and landed in some ones kitchen. I used my front feet to kick him off he hit the ceiling and fell back to the ground I should up and was about to ask him what was that for when lighting bolt hit me. I went through two walls and landed on a street. I slowly rolled over and pushed my self up. I got a head ach from that shot. Know I was mad I walked back to where the battle was. Right when I got there Ally and Blake charged at me I pointed at Ally and a fireball launched at her it hit her and she went flying I swung a punch at Blake. He stopped and dodged it then countered it with a kick. Me and him fought back and forth for a while tell I finally got the upper hand and shot him in the air with a gust of wind.
Then Abby and Braun through me into the air I stopped when I was about 126 ft on the air I stood there floating. Then I realized what I was going to have to do to stop the fighting. I stayed up there and observed the fighting for a little while. The I started to for a highly concentrated ball of energy. It took me a while then when I was finish I shot it. It completely wiped out the city and it people. Every thing was gone. I woke up on the ground and so did my brother and sisters they were to tired to continue fighting.
Atlantis was gone and we decided that this could never happen again so we new that we would have to live on the remains of this once great city to remind use of what happened. We still to this day have fight but I am able to controls them much better now so we don't lose any cities. All the stories you ever heard about the Bermuda triangle are fake we make them up so we don't have million of humans looking around are island and asking a lot of question. Every thing that enters here we destroy we do that so the humans think the Bermuda triangle is hunted and they don't enter any more. Some people have lived even thought they entered we just wiped there memory and sent them back. This is my family and as much as they annoy me I love them.
Monday, May 2, 2011
Raymond
I am Raymond I have a big sister named Hazel Elizabeth Deborah Parker. Every one calls her squeaky I don't know why. I like my sister she is nice and always watches me. She goes every where with me. On some days I get to watch her races other girls. She always wins they always give her a big shiny trophy for winning. I want a trophy just like my sister some day. Today she says she want to teach me how to race so I can win some trophies just like hers. I can't wait to run it is a lot of fun maybe someday I will beat my sister in a race. But not today I learn to race.
Monday, April 11, 2011
Beginning of a great friendship.
I am Aberaz leader of the Armageddon army. We have been sent to a unknown planet that are enemies have been said to have set up there main base. We are the army made up of are best soldiers we have sent to wipe out the new apposing threat.
I wondered down the hall ways of my base inspecting every room to make sure all was in order. When I was done inspecting I headed towards the blasting range to practice my shot. The day seemed to move really slowly an I kind of like it because tomorrow I head out to the unknown planet. I after the shooting range I wondered to a meeting where are leader where filling us in on the final details about are mission. After that I went and did some drills with my team. I knew that tomorrow was going to be along day.
When tomorrow came I got up woke my army up and we prepped for launch. When we got down to the launching station we were briefed on what to do when we got there. Then every one said bye to there love ones and we departed. I wondered about my life on the trip. Every one had some one that loved them. Not me though I am a orphan and have now wife or kids. I spent all of my life fighting and training. I never had many friends. Here and there I had 1 or 2 but we usually split up after a while. I thought to my self when this war is over I think I will retire and try to raise a family. When we family were 1 hour away from landing I should up and gave every one the speech. I yelled " alright we are going into a active war zone keep you head low and your aim straight and you might make it out a live." I new most of us would die maybe even all of use but I didn't want to tell them that. It would break there spirit and that I can't have.
When we landed and the doors opened me and the army charged out of the ship. When we were all out we new something was wrong there was no gun fire. We stayed alert while we scouted the planet about 20 mile from the landing zone was a small camp we attacked it but this army was to small. It was a diversion. They must have fled the planet when they heard we were coming. Set up camp and in the morning. I sent some scouts out to look for any other camps. For hours no report then 8 hours after they were sent out I got word that they saw a camp. They descried it as a strange fort that was made out of some brown material. The material was rough and long. They didn't attack the fort so they didn't know how strong it was.
We decide to go to this strange fort and see who owns it. When we got there they creature that owned it were vary strange. They stood about 5-8 feet tall with strange helmet that were vary fury. They were a white, brown, or light brown color. None of the creatures looked anything alike. They didn't even speak are language.
After a while we talked thought hand symbols then we taught each other are languages. We are species were friends for 2 weeks. We were just learning that wood was what there fort was made out of. We also were learning about there problem back at home the war in there solar system. Then one day a fight started in the town square shots were fired. We don't now who all I new is that a war started in a town square people were shooting back and forth. I tried to stop but I couldn't I found myself in the middle of that battle trying to survive. When it was all over we had 20 prisoners and only 200 men died out of 500 in the battle. The humans were completely wiped out. I we told are leaders about the new species and the fight. I need to new the penalty for the prisoners. My leader told me that they will be stabbed my plasma swords. It was a normal war penalty. So I thought this wasn't a battle we should worry about. We moved are fort for safety. We waited a couple of day nothing then on the 6th day we saw a ship. A human ship landing near the old human fort. I new either the humans would make could friends or strong enemies. Something told me this was the beginning of the end.
I wondered down the hall ways of my base inspecting every room to make sure all was in order. When I was done inspecting I headed towards the blasting range to practice my shot. The day seemed to move really slowly an I kind of like it because tomorrow I head out to the unknown planet. I after the shooting range I wondered to a meeting where are leader where filling us in on the final details about are mission. After that I went and did some drills with my team. I knew that tomorrow was going to be along day.
When tomorrow came I got up woke my army up and we prepped for launch. When we got down to the launching station we were briefed on what to do when we got there. Then every one said bye to there love ones and we departed. I wondered about my life on the trip. Every one had some one that loved them. Not me though I am a orphan and have now wife or kids. I spent all of my life fighting and training. I never had many friends. Here and there I had 1 or 2 but we usually split up after a while. I thought to my self when this war is over I think I will retire and try to raise a family. When we family were 1 hour away from landing I should up and gave every one the speech. I yelled " alright we are going into a active war zone keep you head low and your aim straight and you might make it out a live." I new most of us would die maybe even all of use but I didn't want to tell them that. It would break there spirit and that I can't have.
When we landed and the doors opened me and the army charged out of the ship. When we were all out we new something was wrong there was no gun fire. We stayed alert while we scouted the planet about 20 mile from the landing zone was a small camp we attacked it but this army was to small. It was a diversion. They must have fled the planet when they heard we were coming. Set up camp and in the morning. I sent some scouts out to look for any other camps. For hours no report then 8 hours after they were sent out I got word that they saw a camp. They descried it as a strange fort that was made out of some brown material. The material was rough and long. They didn't attack the fort so they didn't know how strong it was.
We decide to go to this strange fort and see who owns it. When we got there they creature that owned it were vary strange. They stood about 5-8 feet tall with strange helmet that were vary fury. They were a white, brown, or light brown color. None of the creatures looked anything alike. They didn't even speak are language.
After a while we talked thought hand symbols then we taught each other are languages. We are species were friends for 2 weeks. We were just learning that wood was what there fort was made out of. We also were learning about there problem back at home the war in there solar system. Then one day a fight started in the town square shots were fired. We don't now who all I new is that a war started in a town square people were shooting back and forth. I tried to stop but I couldn't I found myself in the middle of that battle trying to survive. When it was all over we had 20 prisoners and only 200 men died out of 500 in the battle. The humans were completely wiped out. I we told are leaders about the new species and the fight. I need to new the penalty for the prisoners. My leader told me that they will be stabbed my plasma swords. It was a normal war penalty. So I thought this wasn't a battle we should worry about. We moved are fort for safety. We waited a couple of day nothing then on the 6th day we saw a ship. A human ship landing near the old human fort. I new either the humans would make could friends or strong enemies. Something told me this was the beginning of the end.
Friday, March 18, 2011
sham rock shakes (from Mc donalds)
Sham rock shake so green and light.
You are a delight. For every child.
With you minty flavor and your soft icy covering.
I will miss you when you depart.
I weight tell you come back next year.
You are a delight. For every child.
With you minty flavor and your soft icy covering.
I will miss you when you depart.
I weight tell you come back next year.
Monday, March 14, 2011
The begining of the end.
I have been deployed to Harina the mist of the battle between the Golondies and us the Alrainy. My name is Aberaz. The Golondies are a clan that was our strongest fight they went extincted or so we thought. Recently they have come back they number are far greater than we imagined. When ever we win a battle a week later there are more we tried to figure out were there are coming from but the Alrainy's can't do that we are the one fight the other to clans are just sitting there they say there waiting and going to help when we can't fight no more. I don't see how that will work but We can't argue with them they are to stubborn.
I just landed and realized that the war is 5 times worse then the last time a saw it. There were so many there use to be only 500-1,000 enemies there army is up to well over 3000-5000 now. We are struggling to keep them held back were are they all coming from. I got up to the front line with my troops. The leading officers looked at me and said "it is a honor to have you no offense but we need more than you ser there are thousands now." I thanked him for the advise and told him I would radio in for more troops. After I radioed in and the base about the trouble they sent out 1000 more troops but they wouldn't be here for 14 more hours so we had to hold out. Iran back and told the officer the news he was happy and a little worried that we might make it that long. I told him we would be fine before me and my squad departed and left for the right flank. We fought hard and good for several hours. When there was 4 hours left we thought that we might make it until. I saw a motor bullet falling towards us where had it come from I thought before it land and blew apart the right flank. When I opened my I still in a daze my ears were ringing stood up and staggered toward a fallen friend I could se the death in his eyes after one look. I knew he had passed on I was mad and confused that was a bigger explosion than usually for a motor. I look around and saw the allies retreating that the motors were firing. I tried to run but sense I was still in a daze would only make it a few feet then fall over. I stood up and tried to stumble over towards cover. I noticed that the motors had stopped firing. I saw the ships in the distances only 2 more hours tell arrival but would we make it that long. I look over the cover and saw the enemies charging turned around and saw the allies running. I most of passed out because the next thing I saw was the reinforcements landing and charging out. The enemies were running back to there ships they knew they were out matched.
I was dragged to the ship and given medical intention. I was feeling better since the little nap I had 5 minutes ago. All the survivors loaded up and taken care off. We started to take off. In a few seconds we were off. Was about a 3 hour ride back I decided to sit back and relax. About half of the way there alarms started going off I realized there was a missiles heading for use. I buckled up prepared for a rough landing. We maneuvered away from most of them and the last missile hit use we went straight down. I woke up in the middle of the desert. If there were any survivors from the crash they had already left because every one else was dead. I started stumbling down towards the base. I new I had a hour of traveling a head of me. I walked for miles and miles it felt like days had gone by when I finally got to my base. I stumbled in and fell straight on the ground. I was helped up and given food and water. I recovered in about a day. When I felt good enough I went my leaders and told them It was we joined to gather we will never win at this rate they took my word and all three colonies joined together. Then the leaders told me that the received word of where the enemies are coming from and they are going to assemble an army that I am going to lead to wipe them out. I knew that this was only the beginning of the biggest war in are history.
I just landed and realized that the war is 5 times worse then the last time a saw it. There were so many there use to be only 500-1,000 enemies there army is up to well over 3000-5000 now. We are struggling to keep them held back were are they all coming from. I got up to the front line with my troops. The leading officers looked at me and said "it is a honor to have you no offense but we need more than you ser there are thousands now." I thanked him for the advise and told him I would radio in for more troops. After I radioed in and the base about the trouble they sent out 1000 more troops but they wouldn't be here for 14 more hours so we had to hold out. Iran back and told the officer the news he was happy and a little worried that we might make it that long. I told him we would be fine before me and my squad departed and left for the right flank. We fought hard and good for several hours. When there was 4 hours left we thought that we might make it until. I saw a motor bullet falling towards us where had it come from I thought before it land and blew apart the right flank. When I opened my I still in a daze my ears were ringing stood up and staggered toward a fallen friend I could se the death in his eyes after one look. I knew he had passed on I was mad and confused that was a bigger explosion than usually for a motor. I look around and saw the allies retreating that the motors were firing. I tried to run but sense I was still in a daze would only make it a few feet then fall over. I stood up and tried to stumble over towards cover. I noticed that the motors had stopped firing. I saw the ships in the distances only 2 more hours tell arrival but would we make it that long. I look over the cover and saw the enemies charging turned around and saw the allies running. I most of passed out because the next thing I saw was the reinforcements landing and charging out. The enemies were running back to there ships they knew they were out matched.
I was dragged to the ship and given medical intention. I was feeling better since the little nap I had 5 minutes ago. All the survivors loaded up and taken care off. We started to take off. In a few seconds we were off. Was about a 3 hour ride back I decided to sit back and relax. About half of the way there alarms started going off I realized there was a missiles heading for use. I buckled up prepared for a rough landing. We maneuvered away from most of them and the last missile hit use we went straight down. I woke up in the middle of the desert. If there were any survivors from the crash they had already left because every one else was dead. I started stumbling down towards the base. I new I had a hour of traveling a head of me. I walked for miles and miles it felt like days had gone by when I finally got to my base. I stumbled in and fell straight on the ground. I was helped up and given food and water. I recovered in about a day. When I felt good enough I went my leaders and told them It was we joined to gather we will never win at this rate they took my word and all three colonies joined together. Then the leaders told me that the received word of where the enemies are coming from and they are going to assemble an army that I am going to lead to wipe them out. I knew that this was only the beginning of the biggest war in are history.
Thursday, March 10, 2011
Spilt world
The year was 2081. The world has been divided in half. There is the perfect side and rebels. The U.S. government took over the world and tried to make every one exactly the same. Some people didn't want to be part of the perfection the government was exclaiming they were going to give. The people that didn't want to be part of this had to hide from the government it wasn't simple. The government was putting helmets on people they thought were to smart. Weights on people that were to strong. We new we had to free them. Still to this day we are trying to free them It has been 3 month of war.We had a man on the inside and we just got word he has been shot. His name was Harrison, Harrison Bergeron.
Story inspired by The story "Harrison Bergeron"
Story inspired by The story "Harrison Bergeron"
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